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(English version bellow)

Une sueur froide sur le front,
les yeux liquéfiés
Les lèvres d'une cendreuse carnation,
Ainsi qu'un filet de pus filtrant par le nez.

Par leur froideur les membres figés,
Les voies respiratoires obstruées par le mucus
Me protégeant de leur mensongère fumée.
Mensongère et asphyxiante.

L'abdomen tuméfié,
De larves empli
Écloses des idées
Dont ils m'ont nourit.

La bouche gluante
Par les tractations vaines.
L'haleine nauséabonde
Par les propos qu'elle porte.

Ces propos venimeux
Que l'air transpire
Et qui dévorent le système nerveux,
Paralysant les sens de la victime.

Je fixe mon plafond
Au sortir de ma torpeur matinale.
Il me faudrait me lever mais à quoi bon
lorsque le monde est laid comme un cadavre en décomposition,
Pourri comme celui affligé de la pire des Pestes.

(English Version)

Cold sweat on the forehead,
Liquified eyes
Ashen white lips as well as
A streak of pus filtering from the nose

Members locked by their coldness,
Lungs obstructed by mucus
Protecting me from their deceitful smoke.
Deceitful and Asphyxiating.

The swollen abdomen,
Filled of larvas
Born from the ideals
Which they feed me.

The mouth dryed
By their futile debates.
The breath nauseating
By the matters it carries.

These venimous matters
That the air perspires
Which devour the neural system,
Paralysing the vicitm's senses.

I stare at my ceiling
As I escape my morning torpor.
I shall get up but whats the point
When the world is as hideous as a decomposing corpse,
Rotten as one aflicted by the worst of Plagues.
©2003-2009 ~silenceispain
:iconsilenceispain:

Author's Comments

I just happened to be horibly tired, bored and tired (oh, already said that one...) and ended up seeing the whole world as a rotted corpse.

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Very strongly detailed and profound, I was compelled to read just to see how it would end, and what I would see next.
I haven't felt something like that in ages, very nice. Keep writing, you have tremendous talent.

"Members locked by their coldness,
Lungs obstructed by mucus
Protecting me from their deceitful smoke.
Deceitful and Asphyxiating."

The best stanza of September, in my opinion. I was astonished at how fucking amazing this piece was. I wish I could have found you sooner.

:+fav: . . isn't that the way the icon goes?

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no.
:iconsilenceispain:
Thank you very much! My insiration has been dead for something like half a year now and it seems to have came back. I hope it wont go away anymore too soon! Anyways, its realy great to read comments like yours. Thanks again!
:iconflowerofevils:
Genial! degueulasse et sublime a la fois, je dois prendre une douche....

Hannele

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Dr. Lecter: I must confess to you, I'm giving very serious thought... to eating your wife.
:icon3kbrix:
Man ye fucking chill ass ce poeme la un de mes preferer simplement badass

go go nurgle
:iconsilenceispain:
Indeed, may Father Nurgle spread his children to all.

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